Tuesday, September 30, 2008

Corrupt society


here is a poem i wrote today in school... the poem has mostly hidden meanings which are not understandable unless you know me... same with the picture i have, i drew that today just to fit the poem... hope you like it

Corrupt Society
By Julian Starkey
In memory of Moja Milosc


Fly into the city
Gunshots in the air
Bullets raining down
People screaming there

Rip a piece of paper
Paper made of steel
Fly into the city
Where everyone shall kneel

Two hundred gather
All wearing green
They pray that she
Will help to make them free

Fly into the city
A raging fight goes on
Listen to the knives drop
Rebels down one by one

She wields a bow
He wields a sword
Together they clash
Who will be the victor?

Shot in the knee
Struck in the arm
Everyone is watching
She remains strong

The battle continues
She is struck down
The war hero has fallen
Everyone’s eyes are loud

The battle has been lost
The rebels lost the day
Never give up, never surrender
Just live and let die

1 comment:

Just Me said...

Wowies

I like that too. Actually, I tink I am going to like just about anything you write...your poems are amzing.

*hugs*